Thank you Geraldine :) As to more, I sometimes think my mum's principle for kids' birthday parties applies to short stories too -- finish before everyone stops having fun! But since you and others have liked this one, I may write another story or two about Jack and his world.
Alison, what an engrossing story. I was there is the jewellers , watching. Just wanted more!
Geraldine
Thank you Geraldine :) As to more, I sometimes think my mum's principle for kids' birthday parties applies to short stories too -- finish before everyone stops having fun! But since you and others have liked this one, I may write another story or two about Jack and his world.
Do please@