Thank you Geraldine :) As to more, I sometimes think my mum's principle for kids' birthday parties applies to short stories too -- finish before everyone stops having fun! But since you and others have liked this one, I may write another story or two about Jack and his world.
I really enjoyed this! I enjoyed being in Jack's head and am hoping he succeeds a a jeweler.
Great Kelli ! No spoilers, but adult Jack is a character in the novel I’m writing 😉 And I’ve got another short story about his past in the works.
Yay!
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Alison, what an engrossing story. I was there is the jewellers , watching. Just wanted more!
Geraldine
Thank you Geraldine :) As to more, I sometimes think my mum's principle for kids' birthday parties applies to short stories too -- finish before everyone stops having fun! But since you and others have liked this one, I may write another story or two about Jack and his world.