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Phil Bachmann's avatar

I hope the main character in this story has a plan for behaving better next time.

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Susan Schwartz Twiggs's avatar

I enjoyed your story. I just finished The Book of Longing by Sue monk Kidd, n imagining about the wife of Jesus. She also gives an historical fiction account of Jesus’ last day. It’s very moving.

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Alison Lloyd's avatar

Thanks Susan! I'm glad you liked my story and Sue Monk Kidd's novel. Sometimes translating the historical gospels into modern forms makes the story more accessible. That's my hope anyway. The gospels are so full of riveting human detail. I love them.

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Joanne Sullivan's avatar

Thanks Alison, this is a really good story that helped me understand Peter , who we see differently now.

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Alison Lloyd's avatar

Hey Joanne, glad you got something out of it. That's why I write. Well, that and the fact that I get something out of the writing too ;)

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